Mr. lee's expository writing class (kayak1)

Race #32833

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Official speed 120.67 wpm (36.20 seconds elapsed during race)
Race Start November 11, 2016 3:53:21pm UTC
Race Finish November 11, 2016 3:53:57pm UTC
Outcome Win (1 of 3)
Accuracy 98.0%
Points 0.00
Text #3100052 (Length: 364 characters)

Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or avoid all detail and treat subjects only in outline, but that every word tell.