View Pit Stop page for race #32833 by kayak1 — Ghost race
View profile for Mr. lee's expository writing class (kayak1)
Official speed | 120.67 wpm (36.20 seconds elapsed during race) |
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Race Start | November 11, 2016 3:53:21pm UTC |
Race Finish | November 11, 2016 3:53:57pm UTC |
Outcome | Win (1 of 3) |
Accuracy | 98.0% |
Points | 0.00 |
Text | #3100052 (Length: 364 characters) Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or avoid all detail and treat subjects only in outline, but that every word tell. |