View Pit Stop page for race #28424 by kayak1 — Ghost race
View profile for Mr. lee's expository writing class (kayak1)
| Official speed | 99.17 wpm (44.05 seconds elapsed during race) |
|---|---|
| Race Start | September 23, 2016 10:49:38pm UTC |
| Race Finish | September 23, 2016 10:50:22pm UTC |
| Outcome | No win (2 of 4) |
| Opponents |
1. tbbone (113.53 wpm) |
| Accuracy | 89.0% |
| Points | 0.00 |
| Text | #3100052 (Length: 364 characters) Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or avoid all detail and treat subjects only in outline, but that every word tell. |